Summary:Lily, Rosie and Tess are nine years old Childred. They lived with their Aunt Lucy in a lovely blue house. They all have their own nook in the attic, they have a big playground which has many toys and books, It also can prived a place to make them discuss. One day, they decide to sew something, their aunt Lucy like this idea, and give them some money and ask them to buy cake ,tea and some oranges to visit Mrs White who is a elderly woman like childe and gave each of them a little cat she had sewm herself when they visited.After that, Lily Rosie and Tess spend every afternoon to study sew from Mrs White. they also have some fun when they study sew,they saw Mrs White's letters and know how to write letters, and they take part in Michael's party who give each person a gift is Lucy's boyfriend.they make different gifts for every one, and in the party, Tess sing songs, LiLy read a poem and Rosie handed out the pastry puffs on little saucers.After thouse few days, they find they are not only study how to sew, but also find their own goals. Tess want become a famous star, Lily want to write poem in the future and Rosie will hand out the pastry puffs, those are the best gift for themselves.
In my opinion, I think everyone need to have a "special gift" for ouselves, this is dream, we need to know what are interested in, and we also need to find some fun in our life and do it.
This is a good topic, but I did not understand some sentences,specially sentence after one day, It is long sentence. Also, there are some words which do not have right spelling, and you can review it and correct It.In addition you use words of "to sew something," what does mean that? and what is relation with buying cake? I think you wrote a good topic, but I did not get the main idea. Therefore, you can rewrite your paragraph with correct spelling to be perfect. I agree with you Meiling that every one has a special gift in his/her life. I know that you always write lovely stories, I want to read more of your stories. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThis is a very lovely story. It makes me think about my childhood. When I was a child, I wanted my nook with many toys as Lily, Rosie, and Lucy. However, it could not be because my house has not enough places to get it. I have never learned sewing. My mother could sew several things. While she was sewing them, I was just watching her, and then I was surprised. Also, I thought about that I had a dream when I was child. I agree with Arkan's comment. Some sentences confuse me and do not understand. However, I can understand most them and I agree with everyone need to have a special gift. Maybe we have already had the gifts since we were born. We just might not recognize them. I also hope everyone finds them.Thank you for sharing your book
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